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« on: December 14, 2012, 10:40 »
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Hello:
I'm very greatful with past critiques they really help me evolve, I'm not quite there yet but how about this?
Thanks in advance for your time!!!

*https://www.dropbox.com/s/g15k015j1k3kzgy/IMG_3766.jpg* White road line
*https://www.dropbox.com/s/ix40m03acrantci/IMG_3676.jpg* Yellow flower in shade
*https://www.dropbox.com/s/kwl89x2aq6xmiup/IMG_3688.jpg* Yellow flower sun
*https://www.dropbox.com/s/99qriivqimz3owu/IMG_3727.jpg* Yellow flower on the road

Edit: I remove the similar Pictures and corrected the blown out flower, and added 2 more flowers in different ligths!!!
« Last Edit: December 15, 2012, 09:06 by Byron PH »


« Reply #1 on: December 14, 2012, 10:47 »
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I'm assuming you were thinking of these for stock - in which case I wouldn't submit any of them.

For the white line pictures - and at first I thought I'd copied the URLs wrong and had multiple copies of the same shot as they were so similar - the composition's awkward and not enough is in sharp focus.

The lighting on the flower pictures is too harsh and you've blown out parts of the petals. The first two don't have enough of the shot in sharp focus. The last one doesn't appear to have anything in sharp focus, but you need to get the petals sharp for something like this. Especially for flower pictures (which are heavily oversupplied) you need to have excellent shots or they'll be rejected and these just aren't.

More practice :)

gillian vann

  • *Gillian*
« Reply #2 on: January 02, 2013, 19:11 »
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backlighting is often nicer with these, and if done with a reflector on a cloudy day will give a nice result.
I wouldn't even touch the flower category, unless I had some genius unique idea.


 

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