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Assuming its technically okay at 100% and fully model-released i would accept it. Without Modelreleases only as editorial. Personally i find it a little bit boring but i can see some usage in it.

Agree with Whitechild, but I think the composition could be changed a little.
Maybe crop the left side some.

Hi Larry,

I'm sorry but I can already say I wouldn't for compositional reasons.
Why are the people walking out of the image? I guess you have their backs to the camera to avoid MR hassel, but then I'd think the image would be better if the people where down in the right hand corner, on their way into the image. Or turned around, on their way towards the camera so we could see the smiles and "oh how fun a field trip they are having."
I'd imagine most people pictures that sell well are ones with faces on, people relate to faces, and emotions expressed by faces can help sell a product. I see no sensation in this image, but faces could change that, and add a feeling, mood or emotion. I don't know if they are on their way on a trip and are having fun or if they are leaving some dull museum and are tired and can't wait to get home...
I'm not sure what commercial use could be put to this photo, some of the inspectors liked it though, that should be good enough

best regards

NO.

1. Having said that: would definately want a model release.
2. The blue and red curves seem overworked.
3. YES IF, you cropped it to the point where the sunlight begins, the pier to the right, and the top of the pergola.

Compositionally it worries me that the kids are walking into an area I cannot see. If there was more room between the kid on the far left and where they were walking would be a great shot.