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Title: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: MarkRyanDesigns on July 31, 2012, 11:22

Is the First style as good as the second? Any suggestions to improve it?

http://markryandesigns.wordpress.com/2012/07/31/262/ (http://markryandesigns.wordpress.com/2012/07/31/262/)

Title: Re: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: Maui on July 31, 2012, 11:25

I prefer the first. Somehow those large eyes look better.

Title: Re: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: Microbius on July 31, 2012, 11:28

prefer the second, something is up with the neck in no. 1

Title: Re: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: MarkRyanDesigns on July 31, 2012, 11:36

WHat about now with the bigger head and smaller neck?

Title: Re: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: PinnacleAnimates on July 31, 2012, 12:16

Will prefer the first one  :)

Title: Re: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: click_click on July 31, 2012, 12:30

First one hands down! Good work!

Title: Re: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: ThomasAmby on July 31, 2012, 16:22

Both good, but first is better  :)

Title: Re: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: cidepix on July 31, 2012, 17:47

whatever you feel comfortable with is better..

listen to your inner voice :)

Title: Re: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: Starzipan on August 05, 2012, 16:14

I like the elongated face better but his eyes seem to be looking more at the sky than straight forward. 

The round headed guy seems to be looking more straight forward but something about his face doesn't quite jive well with me.  It might be the use of more gradients in his face than the elongated one.

Title: Re: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: JPSDK on August 05, 2012, 16:31

Second one, the first is too much Alladin. Too unfocused.

Title: Re: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: Karimala on August 05, 2012, 17:14

I like them both equally for different reasons.  Why not submit both of them at different times so they don't get rejected for "too many similiars" and to give buyers a choice?

Title: Re: Any illustrators have time to judge?
Post by: MarkRyanDesigns on August 07, 2012, 08:35

Thanks for the comments, I ve been starring at these illustrations for so long the feedback really goes a long way!