Looks very nice to me. How are you getting printed? Is it smaller than what I see? The small type looks good in the size I see, but if print size is smaller and they use a (porous/textured?) stock it the fine detail may be lost. Also discuss the printer's cropping margins before you send it off. If they crop 1 or 2 mm off your margins, the look may not be what you want.
Aside - are you really with Fotolia exclusively? Man, they make only about 5-6% of my earnings.