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Microstock Photography Forum - General => Photo Critique => Topic started by: rachell on October 20, 2006, 00:00

Title: Illustration Review
Post by: rachell on October 20, 2006, 00:00

Hi All! I'm working on this illustration and feel I should do more on it (shadows around the hand), but am wondering if I should just leave it alone and mark it finished -- what do you guys think?

(http://www.rachellcoe.com/images/showing_wedding_ring.gif)

Title: Re: Illustration Review
Post by: leaf on October 20, 2006, 02:43

i think her nose is too pronounced. and perhaps the body behind her hand could be a little darker than her hand to show depth a little better.  Lastly, the line of her body on the left, matches the line on her left hand, perhaps these lines could be displaced a little.

ok... just my thoughts, take them for what they are... or aren't.

Title: Re: Illustration Review
Post by: digiology on October 20, 2006, 02:55

At first glance I thought the thumb nail was a nipple.  :o

Otherwise great start.

Title: Re: Illustration Review
Post by: rachell on October 20, 2006, 09:32

Thanks you guys for the honest critique -- its back to the drawing board!!!

Title: Re: Illustration Review
Post by: yingyang0 on October 20, 2006, 10:04

The rock on the finger should have a lot more detail since that is the focal point of the scene.

Title: Re: Illustration Review
Post by: CJPhoto on October 20, 2006, 10:23

As meantioned be Yingyang, the rock needs a bit more bling.  And better placement of the thumbnail.