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rachell:
Hi All! I'm working on this illustration and feel I should do more on it (shadows around the hand), but am wondering if I should just leave it alone and mark it finished -- what do you guys think?

leaf:
i think her nose is too pronounced. and perhaps the body behind her hand could be a little darker than her hand to show depth a little better.  Lastly, the line of her body on the left, matches the line on her left hand, perhaps these lines could be displaced a little.

ok... just my thoughts, take them for what they are... or aren't.

digiology:
At first glance I thought the thumb nail was a nipple.  :o

Otherwise great start.

rachell:
Thanks you guys for the honest critique -- its back to the drawing board!!!

yingyang0:
The rock on the finger should have a lot more detail since that is the focal point of the scene.

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