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« on: October 20, 2006, 00:00 »
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Hi All! I'm working on this illustration and feel I should do more on it (shadows around the hand), but am wondering if I should just leave it alone and mark it finished -- what do you guys think?



« Reply #1 on: October 20, 2006, 02:43 »
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i think her nose is too pronounced. and perhaps the body behind her hand could be a little darker than her hand to show depth a little better.  Lastly, the line of her body on the left, matches the line on her left hand, perhaps these lines could be displaced a little.

ok... just my thoughts, take them for what they are... or aren't.

digiology

« Reply #2 on: October 20, 2006, 02:55 »
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At first glance I thought the thumb nail was a nipple.  :o

Otherwise great start.


« Reply #3 on: October 20, 2006, 09:32 »
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Thanks you guys for the honest critique -- its back to the drawing board!!!

« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2006, 10:04 »
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The rock on the finger should have a lot more detail since that is the focal point of the scene.

« Reply #5 on: October 20, 2006, 10:23 »
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As meantioned be Yingyang, the rock needs a bit more bling.  And better placement of the thumbnail.


 

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