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English native speakers help thread

Started by jsfoto, September 04, 2013, 08:30

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jsfoto

As I'm not an English native speaker (you might have realized it already  ;D ) I thought it might be a good idea to open this thread. Our network is growing fast and many of us are not English native speakers but would like to have a site that does look professional ... including the English texts. So this is where native speakers could jump in, giving some help and hints.

So here is my first question:

Simple, reasonable pricing ... starting from 4 $

I think everybody can understand it, but is it correct and does it sound good in English?

BTW ... if a native speaker does find anything on my site that sounds strange or is just wrong, please let me know.

Kerioak~Christine

Although you say four dollars when you speak, it is normally written as $4

Is this the sort of thing you are looking for?

jsfoto

Yes exactly ... in this case I just didn't know whether you better say starting with, starting at or sarting from ... I didn't even think about $4 oder 4$. Thanks for that :)

cathyslife

Quote from: jsfoto on September 04, 2013, 10:12
Yes exactly ... in this case I just didn't know whether you better say starting with, starting at or sarting from ... I didn't even think about $4 oder 4$. Thanks for that :)


I would say starting at.
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jsfoto

#4
Thanks Christin and Cathy. Perhaps we can keep this thread up ... sure the non native speakers will profit, but also the network, when the texts sound professional.

ShazamImages

Quote from: jsfoto on September 04, 2013, 10:12
...I just didn't know whether you better say starting with, starting at or starting from ...

You can say either starting at or starting from.  I prefer starting from.
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Kerioak~Christine

I could not find the correct version for from/at

If anyone wants other people's opinions on their text probably easiest to post it here

grsphoto

Quote from: Kerioak~Christine on September 04, 2013, 13:15
I could not find the correct version for from/at


as an TEFL ( Teach English as a Foreign Language) teacher, I will add my 2 cents here.

both from and at are correct, but they have slightly different meanings and not really worth worrying about.

jsfoto


Jo Ann Snover

Couple of suggestions from your "about" page (the strike through text is what you currently have):


Welcome to Flashstockphoto, the stock photo agency of  Jochen Schönfeld. I am have been a stock photographer for many years, based in the South of Germany. 

My ambition goal is to have the pictures you need here, but if I do not, I can offer an alternative where you can purchase direct from another independent artist. If you want to search the entire symbiostock network you can do so here: symbiostock.info

From your description of yourself that shows up on image pages:

I'm living I live in the South of Germany, working as photographer since for almost 20 years.

I would probably say "I live in Southern Germany and have worked as a photographer for almost 20 years". I'm not sure if Southern Germany would be confusing to someone who knows Germany well, but I say I live in Western Washington, not the West of Washington.

Hope these help :)

jsfoto

Wow. Thanks a lot Jo Ann. I'll change that soon! Very much appreciated!

Kerioak~Christine

Just to confuse that last bit even more , I live in the south east of England. Perhaps it depends where you live how it is referred to?

jsfoto

Quote from: jsnover on September 04, 2013, 17:48
Couple of suggestions from your "about" page (the strike through text is what you currently have):


Welcome to Flashstockphoto, the stock photo agency of  Jochen Schönfeld. I am have been a stock photographer for many years, based in the South of Germany. 

My ambition goal is to have the pictures you need here, but if I do not, I can offer an alternative where you can purchase direct from another independent artist. If you want to search the entire symbiostock network you can do so here: symbiostock.info

From your description of yourself that shows up on image pages:

I'm living I live in the South of Germany, working as photographer since for almost 20 years.

I would probably say "I live in Southern Germany and have worked as a photographer for almost 20 years". I'm not sure if Southern Germany would be confusing to someone who knows Germany well, but I say I live in Western Washington, not the West of Washington.

Hope these help :)

Thanks again Jo Ann... I just fixed it. If it is not asked to much and you can find the time I would very much appreciate a check of my F.A.Q.

jsfoto

I just put a new slideshow on my site using these four text snippets:

Stock photos direct from the artist

Reasonable pricing starting at $4

Network with over 100.000 images

Secure checkout with PayPal


I hope they sound like English English, not like German English  ;D

Imagenomad

Quote from: jsfoto on September 07, 2013, 09:10
I just put a new slideshow on my site using these four text snippets:

Stock photos direct from the artist

Reasonable pricing starting at $4

Network with over 100.000 images

Secure checkout with PayPal


I hope they sound like English English, not like German English  ;D

A minor point (pun intended) but most of the World would write ein hundert tausend as 100,000 or 100 000 rather than the Continental 100.000

jsfoto


cascoly

Quote from: Imagenomad on September 07, 2013, 12:23
Quote from: jsfoto on September 07, 2013, 09:10
I just put a new slideshow on my site using these four text snippets:

Stock photos direct from the artist

Reasonable pricing starting at $4

Network with over 100.000 images

Secure checkout with PayPal


I hope they sound like English English, not like German English  ;D

A minor point (pun intended) but most of the World would write ein hundert tausend as 100,000 or 100 000 rather than the Continental 100.000

also a reminder that when entering prices you need to enter 15.00 rather than 15,00 even for euros and other currencies -- I've noticed a couple of people who ended up with huge prices this way and have sent PM when I see them, but may miss some
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