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« on: October 19, 2009, 20:16 »
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Ich suche hilfe, etwas auf Deutsch zu schreiben. Auf nglish habe Ich:

"Golden Christmas bauble with golden ribbon. Sample greeting text is included, but you can change it, as well as the font type and size.

Check all my Christmas and New Year cards. For other languages, check my collection of greeting cards."

Und Ich habe es so bersetzt:

"Goldene Christbaumkugeln mit golden Band. Probetext enthalten ist, aber du kannst es ndern, sowie die Schriftart und Gre.

Prfe du alle mein Weihnachten und Neujahr Karten. Fr andere Sprachen, prfe meine Sammlung von Grukarten."
« Last Edit: October 19, 2009, 20:49 by madelaide »


« Reply #1 on: October 19, 2009, 22:23 »
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Goldene Christbaumkugel mit goldenem Band. 
Der enthalte Mustertext kann gendert werden, ebenso Schriftart und -gre.

Schauen Sie sich auch meine anderen Weihnachts- und Neujahrskarten an.
Fr andere Sprachen, sehen Sie sich mein Sortiment an Grukarten an.

« Reply #2 on: October 20, 2009, 15:46 »
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Danke, redo!

Mu Ich "du" benutzen? Ich finde es zu formell...

« Reply #3 on: October 20, 2009, 16:38 »
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Und auerdem, ist das richtig?

"Mit den besten Wnschen fr ein frohes Weihnachtsfest und ein glckliches Neues Jahr"

« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2009, 18:13 »
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Hi Madelaide,
your translation is near by, any german speaking people would have understand what you liked to say. The correction from redo is correct. If you would like to say it less formaly (in direct translation) by using "Du" (="Dir" in this case) it can be written this way:

Goldene Christbaumkugel mit goldenem Band. 
Der enthalte Mustertext kann gendert werden, ebenso die Schriftart und -gre.

Schau Dir auch meine anderen Weihnachts- und Neujahrskarten an.
Fr andere Sprachen, schau Dir mein Sortiment an Grukarten an.

regards by bertold


« Reply #5 on: October 20, 2009, 18:51 »
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bertold,

My question was wrong.  I should have asked if "Sie" was necessary, because I find it too formal, and I would prefer to use "du".  My German is very rusty, having studied it so long ago and using it so little. :)  Thanks for your reply.

« Reply #6 on: October 20, 2009, 20:00 »
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bertold,

My question was wrong.  I should have asked if "Sie" was necessary, because I find it too formal, and I would prefer to use "du".  My German is very rusty, having studied it so long ago and using it so little. :)  Thanks for your reply.

If I understand your context to be that these are cards that will be on sale to the public in general, then I think the Sie form sounds more natural - of course others with a more native knowledge of mine may disagree ;)

« Reply #7 on: October 20, 2009, 20:11 »
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Ich wuerde auf jeden Fall "Sie" verwenden. Hoert sich viel professioneller an.

Redos Ubersetzung ist makellos. Gut gemacht!

« Reply #8 on: October 21, 2009, 15:30 »
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Und ber dieser Satz?

"Mit den besten Wnschen fr ein frohes Weihnachtsfest und ein glckliches Neues Jahr"

« Reply #9 on: October 21, 2009, 15:37 »
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Und ber dieser Satz?

"Mit den besten Wnschen fr ein frohes Weihnachtsfest und ein glckliches Neues Jahr"

It depends on the context.

Is this just a text on a greeting card or is it the final paragraph of your web site?

« Reply #10 on: October 21, 2009, 15:41 »
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It's the text inside the card.  I have a basic text in my card, but allow buyers to change it if they wish.

check it here
« Last Edit: October 21, 2009, 15:52 by madelaide »

« Reply #11 on: October 21, 2009, 15:45 »
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It's the text inside the card.  I have a basic text in my card, but allow buyers to change it if they wish.

OK so this would be the final sentence.

You can leave it the way you posted it.

Just to put it like:

"Ein frohes Weihnachtsfest und ein glckliches Neues Jahr!" would be also ok.

I'm not a pro at editing greeting card text but I think you can get some "inspiration" by checking out some greeting card stores online.



 

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