Ich suche hilfe, etwas auf Deutsch zu schreiben. Auf �nglish habe Ich:

"Golden Christmas bauble with golden ribbon. Sample greeting text is included, but you can change it, as well as the font type and size.

Check all my Christmas and New Year cards. For other languages, check my collection of greeting cards."

Und Ich habe es so �bersetzt:

"Goldene Christbaumkugeln mit golden Band. Probetext enthalten ist, aber du kannst es �ndern, sowie die Schriftart und Gr��e.

Pr�fe du alle mein Weihnachten und Neujahr Karten. F�r andere Sprachen, pr�fe meine Sammlung von Gru�karten."

Danke, redo!

Mu� Ich "du" benutzen? Ich finde es zu formell...

Hi Madelaide,
your translation is near by, any german speaking people would have understand what you liked to say. The correction from redo is correct. If you would like to say it less formaly (in direct translation) by using "Du" (="Dir" in this case) it can be written this way:

Goldene Christbaumkugel mit goldenem Band. 
Der enthalte Mustertext kann ge�ndert werden, ebenso die Schriftart und -gr��e.

Schau Dir auch meine anderen Weihnachts- und Neujahrskarten an.
F�r andere Sprachen, schau Dir mein Sortiment an Gru�karten an.

regards by bertold

bertold,

My question was wrong.  I should have asked if "Sie" was necessary, because I find it too formal, and I would prefer to use "du".  My German is very rusty, having studied it so long ago and using it so little.   Thanks for your reply.

If I understand your context to be that these are cards that will be on sale to the public in general, then I think the Sie form sounds more natural - of course others with a more native knowledge of mine may disagree

Und �ber dieser Satz?

"Mit den besten W�nschen f�r ein frohes Weihnachtsfest und ein gl�ckliches Neues Jahr"

It's the text inside the card.  I have a basic text in my card, but allow buyers to change it if they wish.

check it here